Comments on: Flash Fiction – A Single Moment Of Weakness

By: Duane

Duane — Wed, 03 Mar 2010 23:42:33 +0000

I think if I can make someone choke, I’ve done a great job.

You’re all very kind, and good for my self esteem. Maybe I should do this writing thing more often.

Jimmy Callaway — Wed, 03 Mar 2010 05:05:30 +0000

Man, I know it’s been said already, but that twist snuck up on me and I almost choked on my corn Chex. Hats off.

Artemis Rich — Wed, 03 Mar 2010 00:22:56 +0000

Wow. That was tremendous. So much so that I think I hate you.

David Barber — Tue, 02 Mar 2010 22:48:17 +0000

Wow. Great writing, imagery and a splendid ending. Regards, David.

Chad — Tue, 02 Mar 2010 18:59:08 +0000

Tight story and nice twist — well done

Dottie — Tue, 02 Mar 2010 11:13:06 +0000

Didn’t see that coming at all, I thought maybe a little dalliance behind the curtain. Well done!

Joyce Juzwik — Tue, 02 Mar 2010 04:42:03 +0000

Wow. This moves smoothly along, takes you to the edge, and then hits you like a brick. What a superb story. Brava!

Duane — Mon, 01 Mar 2010 23:26:54 +0000

Thank you for your kind comments. I’m glad you enjoyed the piece.

MRMacrum — Mon, 01 Mar 2010 23:16:27 +0000

Very good. The ending was anything but what I expected. Very real characterization and execution. Liked this very much.

Chris — Mon, 01 Mar 2010 21:33:42 +0000

Wow, didn’t expect that end. Very good twist, and a tight, well-written bit of storytelling.